Any role players or erotic fiction readers on here? I write stories on the website Literotica. I'm stuck on a story I'm trying to write though lol which scenario sounds better? A guy who is getting married is black mailed by a shemale he almost hooked up with; become her slave or she tells everyone at the wedding that he slept with her. Would it be better if she came to his apartment the night before the wedding and he submitted to her there but she still rats him out the next day, or to have her show up at the wedding and him have to sneak off to another room with her and submit to her right before he gets married in order to stop her from ratting him out.
I was going to drag it out to the wedding to add more of a build up but some part of me wants it to happen sooner. Anyway, let me know which sounds hotter.
I was going to drag it out to the wedding to add more of a build up but some part of me wants it to happen sooner. Anyway, let me know which sounds hotter.
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